Ohio Impromptu

I enjoyed this a lot! Very nice indeed. The imagery was mind-blowing and your way with words is amazing. The repetition of the last lines of the first three stanzas ...

It was different to say the least. Someone mentioned before that it was "Peter-Pan-esque" and thats what i gathered from it too. Not a bad thing at all, more poetry ...

Ok well since you all gave me your names, i'll give you mine. I'm Luke. This place is great by the way :)

All this time we danced around the truth, And still saw nothing of what it truly is. Maybe it wasn’t meant to be recognized yet, It might be better off ...

Hey. This is my first contribution of work to this site. Be merciless. Apocalypse Of Indecision The sky was rising and falling, threatening in way, like the actions of your ...

Wow... thats all i've really got to say. Even if i found some way to make it better (which i dont) it wouldnt matter. In poems like these the words ...

I enjoyed this piece quite a bit. The imagery was great but I'm not sure if it was because of the actual writing or because i know a person exactly ...

Hi all. I'm Inertia (you will never know my true identity, mwahahahaha) and i'm new here. I joined because i enjoy writing and i would like some feedback from other ...